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ری فریزنگ کے حوالے سے اکثر یہ غلط علم طلباء کو بتایا جاتا ہے کہ صرف الفاظ معنی بدل دیں، تو پیراگراف بدل جائے گا۔ لیکن الفاظ تو روبوٹ یا مشین بھی بدل سکتی۔ اگر آپ زبان کو واقعی انسانی دماغ پر پرکھنا چاہتے ہیں تو پھر اسی بات کو اپنے الفاظ میں اپنے اسٹائل میں بیان کرنا آنا چاہئے۔ یعنی پہلے مرحلے میں پورے کا پورا فقرہ بدلے گا، یا پھر ایک پورا پیراگراف پڑھ کر اسے اپنے انداز میں دوبارہ بیان کیا جائےگا۔
نیچے دیا گئے پیراگراف الجزیدہ اخبار سے لئے گئے ہیں۔ نیچے اوریجنل ٹیکسٹ کو سطر بہ سطر اپنے الفاظ میں تبدیل کرنے کی کوشش کی گئی ہے۔ آرٹیکل میں بتایا گیا ہے کہ کس طرح مصر کے فرعونوں کے کچھ مسجمے چوری ہوکر امریکہ پہنچنے والے تھے کہ چوروں کو پکڑ لیا گیا۔
Original Aljazeera News
Egyptian authorities have arrested three people for trying to steal a millennia-old 10-tonne statue of Pharaoh Ramses II.
The defendants were caught in a quarry south of the city of Aswan with manual digging equipment and a crane, Egypt’s Public Prosecution announced on Facebook on Tuesday.
They are suspected of planning to lift the colossus out of the ground and to “excavate antiquities in the area”, the prosecutor’s office said, adding it had “ordered three defendants be held in custody for four days pending investigations” and asked the police to “quickly investigate others who were involved … in the crime”.
Over the past decade, the country has recovered about 29,000 antiquities found to have been taken abroad through illegitimate means.
The Antiquities Authority in Aswan has proven the “antiquity [of the statue] and attributed it to Ramses II, with a weight of approximately 10 tonnes”, the statement added.
An investigation of the suspects’ mobile phones revealed that they had sent video clips of digging operations and of what appear to be ancient statues via social messaging apps.
Ramses II, one of the most famous pharaohs of the 19th dynasty, ruled for 67 years. He was known as a great warrior and prolific builder who ordered the construction of temples across Egypt.
Egypt has lost countless antiquities to looters, both individuals and foreign governments that colonised Egypt in the past.
Rephrased
- The Egyptian government has halted the plan of stealing 10-ton Pharaonic statutes.
- The plan to steal Pharaonic status was halted by Egyptian government.
- Plan to steal Pharaonic status was unfolded and culprits were arrested on the spot.
- Egvptian authorities have arrested three unknown people who were trving to dig a hole near the famous Pharaonic statues to steal them.
- The defendants were arrested while they were quarrying south of the city of Aswan holding manual digging equipment and heavy machineries.
- The police have imposed charges that they were suspected of planning to dig and excavate antiques.
- During further investigations, culprits have admitted that their plans were to steal and transter the Mommy to USA.
- The local authorities related to Aswan’s Museum have claimed that statutes were belonging to Ramses I era and were verv costiv. The authorities were surprised that how it would be possible to steal and transter such heavy weight mommies under strict security system. They also indicated that there might he some internal involvement.
- There might some internal peone be involved in the plot Rameses II, one of the famous Pharaonic iconic kings who ordered and built Pharaonic templates all over the Egypt during his era.
- Under different colonized rules, the Egypt was deprived of its immense famous pharaonic statutes by the perpetrator’s who cantured and looted its historical treasures.
- The Egyptian government has taken strong steps to recover its mommies that have been taken abroad.